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Gulp! What an ending.

Great story, Faith.

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Thanks, Nathan! I appreciate it!

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Omg! I didn’t know what to expect until the very end. Just an amazing story! You really know how to create tension, raise expectations, and surprise the reader while still answering their questions.

Shoutout to the beautiful, precise prose: “The wind now exerted itself, and the light of the sun was faint and white.” I could picture exactly the subtle light you were referring to.

Thank you for such unmatched talent!!!

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wow — I appreciate this more than I can possibly say. thank you, thank you, thank you!

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